You need to write:

1.Identification of start-up financing requirements and post start-up liquidity situation through trading
2.Clear financial projections and break-even measures with their implications for financial decisions (e.g. pricing, costs and margins) using appropriate methods.
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Presentation of key financial data and analysis covering pre start up financing and the first year trading in cash and profit (breakeven) terms.–Excellent presentation and analysis of the pre and post start up cash forecast for the first year (based on its presentation in the appendices with relevant notes) identifying and analysing the key factors and assumptions. Excellent analysis of breakeven using relevant data and manipulation of assumptions in evaluating the implications for capacity and timing.